Does anyone want to read my college admission essay and give feedback?

I have just finished the second draft of my college application essay.

Before I start my final draft, I thought I would ask someone for some un-biased feedback. Does anyone want to read it?

Thank you.
I don’t want to post it up here, I’m paranoid.

Do you have an email address so I can just attach it?

Sure. Just e-mail it to me or send me a link.

Or paste it in the details. (forgot about that)

Edit: Sure. Just click on my avatar. There should be a link: e-mail Maria. (I don’t want to give out my e-mail to everyone)